Comic 13 - Act 1, Page 10

26th Jul 2014, 12:00 AM in Fear of the Dark
Act 1, Page 10
Average Rating: 5 (2 votes)
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mfox151 26th Jul 2014, 12:00 AM edit delete
mfox151
This page was originally two pages long, with the first and last frame dominating the top half of each page. After looking at it for so long, I really felt how slow it was going. It would have been fine if for an archive binger, but not for someone who reads every update. :(
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Proxy170 26th Jul 2014, 12:02 AM edit delete reply
Proxy170
Pacing seems good so far.
mfox151 27th Jul 2014, 2:30 PM edit delete reply
mfox151
Thanks! This is a stand alone story, so I'm trying to maintain the balance of given the reader enough information without getting into Tolkien or Martin wordiness.
VulturesUnderTheMoon 26th Jul 2014, 1:13 AM edit delete reply
VulturesUnderTheMoon
Haha i like the "i am mot paid enough for this" part! Cracked me up! XD
mfox151 27th Jul 2014, 2:33 PM edit delete reply
mfox151
Thanks! This is a very drama-llama comic, so I'm glad to be able to put these little asides to keep it a little bit lighter.
alston123 26th Jul 2014, 11:31 AM edit delete reply
alston123
Awe. Hang in there Sook. :(
mfox151 27th Jul 2014, 2:33 PM edit delete reply
mfox151
She's hangin' on for dear life.
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